college readiness

Throughout our english class we have been overlooking other people's papers and telling them how they could improve on their papers. I have found good techniques in listening to other people's ideas and hoave found myself becoming a better writer. I just hope everyone else can learn from me as much as i do from them. All in all english class is helpful and really makes me focus on my writing skills.
One reading we went over on our own was the reading called "Patriots". I thought this reading was really interesting and was surprising in then end. However, even though the overall story was good, the end was a bit depressing.....